Koak's art topic

Hello everyone, this is my own little art topic. Yup i draw art too, I just don't role play or keep up with the site, I got a drawing life too.

http://koak-a-cola.deviantart.com/

There is my DA and Hope you have a good day/night

Haha dude I watched you even before you posted this topic! Your arts so pretty! XD

I knoww! Here is a new one

That's amazing!! Great job! I love the bk by the way! XD

thanks, it was a cute little background i did, I was going to do a mountain range but It woudl take me AGES to get the grass done. ONLY THE GRASS.

Cool Art C:

Are you tryin' to get Skailia's style? :3

a little :3

Critique-

Overall the drawing is good, not the best I've seen, but it has potential. My suggestions would be to make the Lower jaw a bit thicker, since it is unnaturally thin, and the body seems to be bent at an awkward angle, or the way you outlined it in the middle it's body makes a point inwards.

I think the paws could use a little work, they seem oddly shaped or mis-proportioned, but other than that, it's pretty good.

I know the paws need work, I was doing some testing.

Yep.

Yep back. It was just a simple test, It would be a mixture of pointy (What I was doing now) and then round. If i ever go back into it, I'm better at drawing birds more then wolves and dogs.

Ten you should post some of your bird drawings C:

I don't have my journal, it's 3 miles away at my school